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Climate change

 

 This week we have been working on our climate change topic this is my climate change piece of work on how we should stop climate change.

Slenderman narritive

 

 This week we had to do a narritive on a photo of a girl in a forest this is my writing 

Explanatory sentence

 This is my explanatory sentence. we had to pick something in your house so i chose bed.

What makes a volcano erupt.

 This week we have been doing explanations on anything we wanted so i done what makes a volcano erupt.

Countries in continents

   
This week we have been working on countries in our continents.

Something I am proud of...

The thing I am most proud of is hitting the middle and the small jumps at the bike park and getting heaps air on the jumps.
 Why it is fun constantly going down there and practising. I wasn't good when I first went down there but now I am really good and I am proud of that.

       

Report about lions,pandas,kangroos

 

This week we have been doing this report about 3 animals Kangaroos,Pandas,Lions. I really liked learning about the panda because it was the easiest one. I am looking forward to writing my own next week.
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Identity poem

we have been learning about poetry. We followed a structure to write an identity poem and then we had to illustrate it. Here is mine.

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Descriptive Writing

WALT:  Use precise adjectives in our writing to add interest to our readers

My story

One dark abandoned old broken warehouse one chair sitting in the middle of the floor with graffiti on the walls. Suddenly!!! a movement from under Some boxes oh no said bob WHAT! said Tim a screeching noise! came out from the boxes in the storage area what said Tim what should we do run OK then said bob ceap up or else you will get killed!!! Oh why am i in the hospital said Tim well you broke your leg because you pounced  off a storage container.     

SELF ASSESSMENT

That I have done nouns,verbs,adverbs and adjectives and  i need to work on punctuation.

Pair assessment

I think you have used descriptive language and really extended yourself. The work ons I have would be proofreading for omissions and punctuation.                          

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