Hello HUNTER I am MELVISH I loved you work and you set up the mood and then you can just picture it and I hoping you will make a new one because I loved this one and just saying will you try to make picture for it next time if there will be one.
Hope everything is going good at home in your bubble!
This is a really great piece of writing that you have created. I enjoyed reading it. I really like a good thunderstorm, its great especially at night time. Well done and keep up the great work! I look forward to reading more of your work while you are learning from home.
Hi Hunter, I'm Dylan from Yaldhurst Model School, YMS for short. I like you paragraph because it's got lots of detail and is good. Next time you could add a person in the storm. From Dylan at YMS.
Hello HUNTER I am MELVISH I loved you work and you set up the mood and then you can just picture it and I hoping you will make a new one because I loved this one and just saying will you try to make picture for it next time if there will be one.
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-Melvish
Hey Hunter
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This is a really great piece of writing that you have created. I enjoyed reading it.
I really like a good thunderstorm, its great especially at night time.
Well done and keep up the great work! I look forward to reading more of your work while you are learning from home.
Until next time
Mrs Costello :)
Hi Hunter, I'm Dylan from Yaldhurst Model School, YMS for short. I like you paragraph because it's got lots of detail and is good. Next time you could add a person in the storm. From Dylan at YMS.
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