my descriptive paragraph

For writing we done a descriptive writing about two fishing boats. Mrs Clark gave this photo that we had to describe with nouns,verbs,adverbs,adjectives to brainstorm. We used these words to work on this paragraph. After we written we then self assessed to see which of the descriptive words to create a paragraph we used.  Next time i would like to include more details.

WALT:  Use precise adjectives in our writing to add interest to our readers

 

Adjectives	Nouns	Verbs	Adverbs
Old	Beach	Crashing	Loudly
Broken	Sea	Boats	Smashed
Sunken	Water	Fishing	Amazing
Sitting	Quite	Pretty	2002

My paragraph

Sitting at an old Quite wharf. To sunken smashed fishing boats people that have never seen such thing before. Amazing said the two children. How did it get there said there mother that is pretty cool said. People say that it was washed up in 2002.