WALT: Use precise adjectives in our writing to add interest to our readers
My story
One dark abandoned old broken warehouse one chair sitting in the middle of the floor with graffiti on the walls. Suddenly!!! a movement from under Some boxes oh no said bob WHAT! said Tim a screeching noise! came out from the boxes in the storage area what said Tim what should we do run OK then said bob ceap up or else you will get killed!!! Oh why am i in the hospital said Tim well you broke your leg because you pounced off a storage container.
SELF ASSESSMENT
That I have done nouns,verbs,adverbs and adjectives and i need to work on punctuation.
Pair assessment
I think you have used descriptive language and really extended yourself. The work ons I have would be proofreading for omissions and punctuation.
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