Wednesday, 14 November 2018
Thursday, 8 November 2018
food and me
Walt
Taha tinana physical eat to survive and energy grow muscles
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Taha whanau social christmas and new years day no food fights and i had pavlova and roast lamb
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Taha hinengaro eat when i'm bored i eat when it smells good,looks,good and its yummy
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Taha wairua spiritual special person-dad for getting my good food like mcdonalds and dominos
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identify reasons for the food choices that people make. Identify relationships between food choices and body image.
Friday, 21 September 2018
prep
This week we have been doing prep. prep is when you make stuff and we have to markets big and small markets and we sold a few but we still have big market to go and we had to sought stuff out before we had prep on this is one of the photos and we made trains,flamingos,dinosaurs,and puppets.
Friday, 7 September 2018
Friday, 24 August 2018
Descriptive Writing
WALT: Use precise adjectives in our writing to add interest to our readers
My story
One dark abandoned old broken warehouse one chair sitting in the middle of the floor with graffiti on the walls. Suddenly!!! a movement from under Some boxes oh no said bob WHAT! said Tim a screeching noise! came out from the boxes in the storage area what said Tim what should we do run OK then said bob ceap up or else you will get killed!!! Oh why am i in the hospital said Tim well you broke your leg because you pounced off a storage container.
SELF ASSESSMENT
That I have done nouns,verbs,adverbs and adjectives and i need to work on punctuation.
Pair assessment
I think you have used descriptive language and really extended yourself. The work ons I have would be proofreading for omissions and punctuation.
Friday, 17 August 2018
my descriptive paragraph
For writing we done a descriptive writing about two fishing boats. Mrs Clark gave this photo that we had to describe with nouns,verbs,adverbs,adjectives to brainstorm. We used these words to work on this paragraph. After we written we then self assessed to see which of the descriptive words to create a paragraph we used. Next time i would like to include more details.
WALT: Use precise adjectives in our writing to add interest to our readers
Adjectives
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Nouns
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Verbs
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Adverbs
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Old
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Beach
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Crashing
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Loudly
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Broken
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Sea
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Boats
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Smashed
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Sunken
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Water
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Fishing
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Amazing
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Sitting
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Quite
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Pretty
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2002
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My paragraph
Sitting at an old Quite wharf. To sunken smashed fishing boats people that have never seen such thing before. Amazing said the two children. How did it get there said there mother that is pretty cool said. People say that it was washed up in 2002.
Monday, 21 May 2018
descriptive sentence 2 week
The Nikau palm is a native tree to New Zealand and you will see them on the coast road on to west port. The Nikau trunk is ruff and bumpy and tall. the green tall leaves are spiky. they take over 100 years to grow. Mrs p told us to do a starter sentence for the Nikau palm tree.
Arthur's pass camp 2018
On the first day of camp we walked up devils punch bowl had a we look up there walked back down
Friday, 23 February 2018
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