Hi Hunter I liked your memory poem but it would be a good idea to try to make a descriptive background for it. Over all it is a very good poem. Keep up the great work!
How are you doing during this Level 4 lockdown? I hope you are doing some fun things at home to pass the time? I am sure you will have some good stories to tell at the end of it!
I enjoyed reading your memory poem, sounds like you have fun at Moana when you go there! Do you have your own bach there? We have a bach at Punakaiki, we like to spend time there too!
Remember to check out the Totara site for some fun ideas of things to do during this time. I like the look of the chicken nugget recipe! Maybe you could help someone at home to try these for tea one night! It could be like homemade McDonalds!!
I look forward to reading some of your work or looking at your photos over the next few weeks!
Your poem is desriptive. Well done. Please have a look at the size of your drawing before you embed it.
ReplyDeleteHi Hunter
ReplyDeleteI liked your memory poem but it would be a good idea to try to make a descriptive background for it. Over all it is a very good poem.
Keep up the great work!
good jod
ReplyDeleteHi Hunter
ReplyDeleteHow are you doing during this Level 4 lockdown? I hope you are doing some fun things at home to pass the time?
I am sure you will have some good stories to tell at the end of it!
I enjoyed reading your memory poem, sounds like you have fun at Moana when you go there! Do you have your own bach there?
We have a bach at Punakaiki, we like to spend time there too!
Remember to check out the Totara site for some fun ideas of things to do during this time. I like the look of the chicken nugget recipe! Maybe you could help someone at home to try these for tea one night! It could be like homemade McDonalds!!
I look forward to reading some of your work or looking at your photos over the next few weeks!
Talk again soon!
Mrs Costello :)